Both got it wrong?

Name: Both got it wrong?
Duration: 12 s
Channel: Jovan
Description: cc-by-sa (CC) Blender Institute, based on original characters (C) by Martin Lodewijk Agent 327: https://cloud.blender.org/p/agent-327/591ab79ebb3ea141675bbad5 Victim: https://cloud.blender.org/p/agent-327/591ab97abb3ea1415d1e2648

by Jovan

Final Rating: 3.27. Finished #144 out of 182 entries.

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Animator

Jovan

Experience

i'm a student, half a year.

Time Taken

5+ hours

Description

cc-by-sa (CC) Blender Institute, based on original characters (C) by Martin Lodewijk

Agent 327: https://cloud.blender.org/p/agent-327/591ab79ebb3ea141675bbad5

Victim: https://cloud.blender.org/p/agent-327/591ab97abb3ea1415d1e2648

Comments

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Reece Morgado

The basic gestures are nice, but the lips and faces are very hard to see and movements don't have much weight behind them. Work on your easing and motion-graphing and you could very easily have something very nice here!

Elisabeth Janerka

Nice setup, but a shame that they are so far from camera and turned to profile like that because it's pretty impossible to see their facial expressions

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto

The idea seems solid, but it needs a few more inbetweens to adjust their speed, and a bit more dynamic poses between the characters, otherwise their performances come off as flat.