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Gunplay
Description
Mischievous little brother gets a hold of his older brother's gun, and starts to play with it, asking what if him and his older brother(who is a cop) switch places, so the little brother would be the cop and the older brother would be the mischievous one.
Comments
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Catherine Lachepelle
Screen right character is way off balance from 95 onwards - he would fall. Also, lacks movement: in most of the scene almost only the screen right only moves arms and mouth (no body, eyes, etc.)
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Still on keys.