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The Killer

by Patsawat Jongchansittho

Final Rating: 5.12. Finished #56 out of 182 entries.

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Experience

3 years

Time Taken

2.5 week

Description

my killer this month

Comments

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Joon Nitiphum

เถื่อนจัง น่ากลัว สยดสยอง

Robert Cartwright

I think the boy with the gun hesitated a bit too long before reacting to the man with the knife. Maybe get him reacting a bit sooner, a bit more exagerrated. Lovely work on the villain though!

Elisabeth Janerka

Nice setup but the staging makes it a bit hard to understand that characters are actually standing behind each other and not next to each other. I would have more a side view on this, and then have the character's heads turned more towards each other, so their eyes are actually looking at the other character.

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto

Nice animation.