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No Witnesses
by Jordan Coles
A bank robbery ends in a climactic standoff between the assailant and the witness...
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Charlton
First shot zips by and is too far back to see acting. Final shot is also too far zoomed out. Camera focal length change could have helped.
Robert Cartwright
Love the theme you went for! It's a little hard to see the other man's facial expressions from that far away, maybe try to exaggerate his movements just a little more to make up for it. Otherwise, well done!
Aaron James Mongcopa
2nd character is so small on screen you can't see his dialogue and facial expressions.
Elisabeth Janerka
Nice idea, but the very first shot is useless as you can't see what is happening at all
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Really neat!