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Alone in the dark
by Jonathan Fontaine October Competition Winner
Learning traditionnal animation for a year and a half
over 15 days
Gina Delatour is investigating a strange facility
Comments
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Darren Evander
the lighting, animation and mood is great overall.I like when she spin to see the door closed. It is smooth and feels natural. the only critique i have is you should improve the story more.
Moses
amazing! could work on the mouth a bit though
david
wow! breathtaking!
Isaac Nathan
The intensity of the light at it's most intense point is a little too intense I think
Alice Lambert
The motion of this is amazing!
Richard Adams
...Wow...This is soooo good! Everything incredibly polished. I think this one's the winner this month.
Carlos
good job!!
Aaron James Mongcopa
Overall, nice shot. But the end turn could be sped up a bit.
Peter Franks
good lighting.
David Summerset
Nice! but if siren lights were somehow integrated in this scene, that would've made this spectacular.
Dylan Connors
can you be my Senpai
Maddoju Ramesh
excellent. definitely will be top 2.
Andriy Hrymalyuk
That's a hell of a job done! Looks amazing!
The flame feels very bright and warm!
Rajarshi Pal
Very nice work
Elisabeth Janerka
Very impressive - especially the turnaround!
CW
This is the winner for me. I love how natural and understated the movement is. Well done