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The fishing master doesn't under
by fang ze ran
Description
The master is fishing by the lake, and the mermaid next to him admires him. Guess they have an ending?
Comments
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Tom Islava
This is good man. I especially like your stretch on fr.165 and the throw on frames 80-88. A couple things I noticed though; when he says "obvious" his mouth doesn't make a "b" shape between frames 153-156, and when the jug lands on his arm on fr. 99, I feel like the arm's reaction to it is a bit too light.
Omar
such a great talent!!





