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Attract
Description
The boy wants to attract the girl while he is desperate, but the girl rejects him sarcastically and is leaving.
Comments
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Alfin
Too fantasy look, just focus on the gesture
Leonardo Pereira
Looks good, nice staging. Try to check the match cut between the shots. Everything needs work to polish but is a great start.
Ben Zingo
watch some of the other entries for this month! It seems like you could have explored some other acting choices, there's a lot of shrugging here, and some more variety would be nice!