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The unnameable
by Jeanne Bigo
At night, two young men meet each other at a video game party. But one of them looks odd.
Comments
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Divina Gracia
Lipsync need to be more clear & syncto the audio
Sean O Boyle
alot of the action is far away and hidden by stationary elements. it's good, just needs different angle/staging
Ash Wood
Great reveal at the end lol
Ben Zingo
more hand/finger movements on the game controller would be nice, and the guy rubbing his neck gets really repetitive. Some rubbing is good for the setup, but having him pause, or change speed, etc. would help it from being too monotonous
Kfir Ben-Dov
Nice layout, but poses and lipsync needs a lot of work.
Mateus Di Mambro
Fun!
picard
super
DarrenT
Great story, explaining why he's talking about a "bat-man".
Lovely movement in the left characters face.
Great setting for the animation.