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A pupil comes too late in class for the umpteenth time. This time he claims to have seen Batman, but his schoolheadmaster is not fooled
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Ben Zingo
I feel like you could push the acting/animation more, but the staging and camera cuts were really nice!
Liam Smith
Really creative and looks like alot of effort was put into it
Kfir Ben-Dov
Story is really cool, there's definitely a potential over here!
The poses could be more pushed, the movements could get more arcs, be more organic and less abrupt. I liked that ending with the form, next time make sure you're clear and easily readable to your viewers, right now I had to struggle to read it. Keep up the good work!
Julian Dill
The lipsync needs work, it's kind of distracting, but when I ignore it, everything else looks good.
Maria
Very cool, I especially like the little thumb twiddle. And all the excuses.