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Friendly Interrogation
Student- learning animation, first attempt at two person dialogue shot.
9 days
After office hours, senior cop and intern discussing about batman's whereabouts.
Comments
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Jessica Graves
Good start. I like the idea.
Julian Dill
You haven't added the lip-sync yet, and I think you need to clean up some of the curves in the graph-editor.
Kfir Ben-Dov
The primary poses and layout are cool. I like the composition. It just needs smoothing out in the arcs, and the body parts. Take care of the spacing problems and tighten up the lipsync
Liam Smith
You could focus the camera on each character when they're talking cause It's hard to see their expressions
Anaïs Ledoux
I like the small head movements! Would look great with lipsync.
Jay G.
Nice believable postures of the characters