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Batman in a nutshell
Description
Two guys in a car are woken up by something. One of them thinks he saw Batman.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
It seemed like the driver woke up/looked out of the car first, seemed to me like the passenger should be asking HIM what he saw
otherwise, I could suggest you go in and add anticipation, overshoot, etc. especially to things like the hands
DarrenT
I really like the story on this one; how the 2 characters wake up to see the "bat-man". However, the timing isn't quite right. The batman moves away before they look.
But great emotions shown on both of them.