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MummyMummy
a typical conversation between two mummies.
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Jay G.
So much is good here...eye focus, emotion, gestures and lip synch
Ben Zingo
Love the bounciness of it, but there a lot you could polish- eye darts, more expressive/animated eyebrows, opening the mouth further to get more expressive mouth shapes, and avoiding a totally-profile view of the head (play to the camera)
Liam Smith
You could move the hands up to be in frame when being used for expressions
Ahmed Morsy
Nice! Just have your characters face camera as much as possible so the audience can see their expressions and lipsync, in a shot like this, I'd say keep their faces 3/4 to cam, and cheat the eyes if you need to.
Reginald C Pumpernickel
This is solid, but I'm not gonna lie the way the dark mummy stares at the light one from frame 20 to frame 160 looks straight up sexual