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It was little scary
by chowyiwong
Second year of animation study , its not perfect , but i did my best .
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Connor Brown
Love the concept and the scene. A little more work on the lip sync and easing in on some of the poses will really take this to the next level. Awesome work!
Christof
Sync seems a little off, but I like the first shot a lot, tons of appeal in her actng. Screen direction is a little confusing as far where the character is looking in the first shot. What if she was upside down at first but in a closeup so we don't see the ropes, and just wonder why she's upside down. Then in the reveal we see the ropes and barrels
Yi
Excellent !!!
Andrew Stewart
Hang the blonder girl's hair down ton show gravity
Joaquin
I think a cut could've been more effective than a zoom out. It felt too sudden for the mood