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Awkward Reunion
by Priyanka
4 years, I mostly make 2D animation
13 days, about 3-5 hours each
Rain is surprised (and rather awkward) that her friend came back despite their previous argument.
Animated in Blender.
Rain Rig provided by Blender Studio
Comments
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Priyanka
I feel confident with the poses, lip-syncing, facial expression, and refinement with squash and stretch, arc, and secondary action used. Though I think I could improve it further by exaggerating the chest movement more as it still feels a bit stiff. Also, although the point is to critique the animation, it does lack a background unlike most entries.
Alyx Clark
like the expressions, could have sharper movement in some places