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Happy familly
by Karen Am
Daughter scared her mother
Comments
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Mau Morris
0-253: I like the small body gestures from the little girl, but it is hard to judge the lip-syncing. A closer camera angle showing more details of the little girl would have been better. Although I like what I presume to be "dishwashing gestures", the scene is dominated by the female character moving her shoulders slightly as she washes the dishes.
128: I'm totally confused by what the relationship is here as the woman clearly has little tolerance for this little girl, but It feels that she pulls the I'm annoyed expression too early. It might have been better if it started at 140 after the words "so angry" to give a better reason for the face of annoyance she gives.





