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Myth of Mystery Town
by John Adarlo
Description
Delta and Beta go and explore the story behind Mystery Town, as legend has it, that Mystery Town has ambiguous history.
Delta attempts to scare Beta more about the legend.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Matu
That bird shot felt a little forced by the audio. I also would tell you to avoid using fading when making a cut.
David Rosenberger
less could be more, it happend to much animation in this clip
John Adarlo
What I like about the animation:
- Nice narrative and storyline
- Cool set that complements the characters
- Love the different shots
What I think needs improving:
- Offset the rest of the body to make the characters' movements more natural.