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Halloween Campfire Stories
Description
It's getting late in the forest, with the moon shining brightly and the fire roaring, but with Halloween right around the corner, you can't go to bed without a spooky campfire story first.
Comments
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Richard Clark
Great lighting and presentation. However, your body mechanics needs improving. The moment between dialogue where she looks into camera. Try to find something to do here instead of just a long stare. Even on "You will" needs some body movement to emphasize the dialogue.
Robyn
Lighting is rly good