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11 second centre of weirdness
Description
Admits the ruins of a ruined city a valiant reporter does her best to plead there case to the valiant hero
Comments
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John Adarlo
What I like about it:
- The body mechanics and the facial expressions are smooth and coherent.
- The subtle gestures are great and the lip syncing is solid.
What I think needs improving:
- Use a background image that isn't watermarked or isn't licensed.
- Increase the lighting so that we can see the characters more clearly.
- Have some birds or characters fly over that match the bird noises in the audio.
Grace
Movements are a bit too airy