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Strange Pyramid
by Camille
Description
Sarah The Journalist discovers strange attacks in Egyptian Pyramid
Comments
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Benay
the lip sync is off, i like the hand held camera movement and the reveal
Richard Clark
Interesting. Lip sync can improve. The motion on the girl at the beginning seems strange to me...like it's floaty and doesn't make sense. I'd say work on the weight of the character.