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The Centre of Weirdness
by Uma
Description
You are invited to discover the origin of all unnatural events and unexplained phenomena.
Comments
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Richard Clark
Not a very interesting setup... very straight to camera and her being directly in the center. Where is she walking to? Probably should have her head towards an exit or door. And it just looks like an empty warehouse or garage. Doesn't convey the center of weirdest on the planet in any way?
Ryen de los Santos
you need a juicier environment. Tell us a story, why is she in the warehouse? What is in the warehouse? What makes the warehouse weird? If you are lacking in animation, get creative with the story.