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The Midnight Seance
Two siblings try to contact a spirit on camera, but something more sinister possesses one of them.
Kyle and Kayla rigs by fRigging Awesome Studios.
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Muhundan Bala
Decent piece!
Right now I don't quite know what the girl is looking at in the beginning, and it looks like she's talking to someone O.S. and not the boy. If she's talking to herself maybe have her pupils more downwards or looking around the room contemplating. Also the boys eyeline doesn't quite align correctly in the beginning.
Also maybe think about re-lighting the scene, right now the characters get a bit lost in the background.
Kiran
Really awesome! I think if u made the lighting and the end a bit more red on the people that could’ve cool. Also the lighting on the boy at the end feels a bit off like there was light right under him but it should’ve been a bit further out. Love the animation and concept tho!!