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Weird Inc
by Tom Weatherill October Competition Winner
Kyle shows kayla a weird place
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Daniel Billings
Love this. Makes me want to know what happens next!
Dominic Friedl
I don't think he should cross his arms.
I love the beginning, and especially where he adjusts his goggles. Just awesome work!!
Emilee Phillips
This one's got to be the winner! Everything is super smooth and clear. I love how you used blurs to direct the viewer's eye. Even when the characters are blurred out, there's still keep alive animation on them. Excellent work!
Ryen de los Santos
I think you can emphasize the "me" mouth pose more, but Great!! animation!
Muhundan Bala
The animation is decent. It would have been great with a little interaction between the girl and the boy f. ex, have her head shake when he asks her, 'still don't believe me?'
I like the style you are going for too, but I feel it lacks some clearer story. When the boy reveals whatever is in the fridge, it would've been cool to actually show what it was in the end - I'm guessing it's a portal but why does he put goggles on and not give one to the girl?
Stephen K
nice
Richard Clark
Great setup with the lighting and camera shots as well as the Depth of Field! The bouncing back of the boy is a bit jarring. And there are parts in the lip sync that are not completely hitting those phonemes. Also, I feel you are twinning the arms a bit too much in the boy's performance. Good luck on the win!
Tim Kamara
Cute !!





