Taking back secrets

Joshua Eton

This is very close to being great. I’d like to see more color and texture on the background as well as a greater light source. I’d argue the story can be fleshed out more here and there because even at a few seconds, you can always tell a simple but clearer story.

Moses Justin Ginaba

good

Richard Clark

Great piece! The acting choice when she says "forget about it" on the main female character is a bit over-the-top and you should consider reducing that motion or come up with something else. The reveal at the end with the kid is funny! Good staging!