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A nice diner

by Cloé

Final Rating: 7.64. Finished #6 out of 73 entries.

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Animator

Cloé

Experience

5 years in animation school

Time Taken

75 hours

Description

Mortimer whish he didn't step into this room because now he's being included into this lovely diner between granny and her friend.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Christof

Beautiful

Moses Justin Ginaba

Flow wasn't bad but yeah, good one

Joshua Eton

I appreciate the effort to give this a cool art style but conceptually and execution wise, I really want to see more animation principles and life in the designs and motion. I’d recommend looking up realistic references for sure.

Richard Clark

Great piece! Great staging! Tells a clear story! I love your subtle performance in this! I have one nit-pick on it; the second shot with the main female... her position at the end is in line with the side of the chimney. I would shift either her or the chimney to break it up. This has a good chance of winning!