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Romance till death

by Bao zheng

Final Rating: 5.63. Finished #22 out of 73 entries.

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Animator

Bao zheng

Experience

2year

Time Taken

25h

Description

love live

Comments

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Joshua Eton

I feel as if the animation could add or use proper tuning and principles. You should also add better concepts and designs to give out a lively feel.

Dante

The spin at the end is really nice, even if it feels a little out of place. There's some nice overlapping action when she settles into his arms at the end. But before that, I think you could hold some poses a little longer. You can add a little sway to help make it not look stiff, but the constant changes between poses doesn't feel natural.

Moses Justin Ginaba

nice

Richard Clark

I like the staging of the shot and how the male comes into frame and dances with her! Her lip sync could be better. I'm not a fan of the rig but what you've done with it is not bad!