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Old ladies want to keep their secret
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Muhundan Bala
Good animation! I think it lacks some contrast in the movements as the timing looks maybe a little too similar overall.
Also when she says 'Martha and I' her shoulders and arms should move a tiny bit too. Right now it looks pretty static and it adds to the feeling of the head being detached from the body.
Joshua Eton
The animation looks fine in terms of movement, timing, space and shape but the execution is brought down by the poor concepts. Next time I’d recommend planning out the idea’s because I can’t tell what story is being told here.
Dante
Really good, only thing I would change is to add a little bit of idle animation to his hand and that elbow on the side
Moses Justin Ginaba
Flow is good, visuals are all good, but couldn't give a hint of their secret, my view. otherwise its really good
Emmy
That laughing is nice!
Richard Clark
Decent pass. The hips (or root) don't move at all. Need to add a bit of life to that. At frame 131, is the characters right hand supposed to be on the table? It's moving around...that caught my eye. When the left hand braces the character screen right, the hand goes a bit IKish (Meaning it locks on the contact point but the rest of the arm on your main character continues to move.)