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On the Phone
Description
Elaine talks to Mortimer on the phone while Martha works on dinner.
Comments
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Moses Justin Ginaba
nice
Richard Clark
Alot of isolated movements and mechanical movements. Lacks weight. I like that you are using props in your scene. Staging could be better. Look at your favorite movies on how they stage scenes and try to replicate that.