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Joshua Eton

Try adding more texture and better light source for next time. I’d also argue to add more timing on the facial expressions to bounce more natural.

Moses Justin Ginaba

good

Richard Clark

You should shoot reference for this. Lacks fundamentals. Arms look IKish. I know that she's sitting but the hips/root needs to be more involved in order to support the movement. I would consider starting with the bouncing ball exercise before doing performances.