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SPACECOWBOYS
by Al Fueyo
one SC Aspirant
Comments
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Iván González
Demasiado twining
Caleb Rankin
Looks great! The hand movements are a little twinned. They seem to hit the same poses at the exact same time as each other. Try just delaying one hand's movement by a frame or two.
Em Harrenstein
It feels too much like he's a bobblehead rotating on his hips. His hips are just moving back and forth while his upper body is swinging all over the place. Tone down his upper body actions a bit and add a little more motion to the hips. Even though we can't see his feet, it's also very obvious that they're glued to the floor. It's good practice to animate things that are even out of camera as it will add to the overall feeling of the motion.
Paul D. Cooke
Very nice. The pose around frame 90 seems oddly timed, but overall well done.
Danny Kneip
The hand gestures are painfully obvious and distracting, but otherwise decently animated. The lip sync needs additional polishing. The concept is a good one. Not sure why the character is always leaning back - seems painful and unnatural. For all of my criticisms, it's a decent little animation and a good foundation to build upon.