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Not a Spaceship
by Ryan Woods
september 2014 competition, senior year at Huntington University
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Adam Gillespie
This reminds me of watching a stage performance. Personally I'd like to see some different camera angles used here, but your animation really did look fluid, so when I say it looks like a stage production I mean I can totally believe this is an actor auditioning for a part on a stage.
brianna mooley
Too stiff, too frozen. It should always be fluid!
Per Cardell
With snappier movements this would be really great!
Ivanovich
Nice at all
Matthew Slanchik
Very good! I like how you "went somewhere" with the dialogue.
Jonas ML
awesome! But it's a little bit strange how the character keeps looking at the cam most of the time
Eliott
knees in bed