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This device

by Maria Daniela Dorta

Final Rating: 3.43. Finished #130 out of 183 entries.

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Experience

2 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

When he was a teenager, his little sister was killed. Adam is trying to go back in time to that day. His friend Erick doesn't agree; he thinks Adam is forgetting the world around him. So he decides to talk to Adam.

Comments

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Em Harrenstein

I don't get what the screwdriver is for? Was it just for the purpose of the sound effects? It also doesn't seem to match the sound effect very well anyway.