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Slideshow Bob
by Per Cardell
The cliche of the weird relative and his everlasting slideshow.
Comments
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Austin Durose
really strong movements, though I found the utching forwards a slight distraction - maybe tone that down a little. but on the whole, great work!
Tim Evans
Great facial expressions and animation. Only critique would be the chair shuffle. Reducing the amount of sideways movements by half and smoothing out the curves would create and more natural feel.
Chaitan Joshi
Love the shift in the projection lights!
Great animation too :)
Tai Beaumont
Very nice! How did you get those nice light rays?
Danny Kneip
Good performance and lip sync.
Em Harrenstein
I don't understand the point of the sleeping people in the background? Also, his expression and motions of being excited don't really fit the dialogue. It's more emotional than that, hence the word "ache".
Yuri Marcel Vieira
Very cool! I was kinda expecting more movement from the sleeping characters, like a snoring thingy
Oliver Pedersen
Needs better acting in the eyes