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Out With It!
by Caleb Rankin
"It's time she knew what I've really been working on."
"Not the time machine shpeel again."
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Annalisa Patterson
I like the lady's expressions in this clip. Also the contrast between the man's emotions and hers makes the clip more unique.
Per Cardell
Hehe. Love is a beautiful thing!
Matt Horstman
His hands had some nice subtle movements going on. The face could have been a lot more expressive. He looked a little bored, even.
Elmira Solo
Good job, having two characters adds up a lot of work.
One thing that I would change is make the girl look at the guy. She seems to be looking up right now at nothing.
Keep up the hard work :)