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time machine
by Beiyi Chua
Description
Still learning ~Accept everyone's comments
Comments
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Tim Evans
Good poses though the transitions are too frequent and feel disconnected by the end. I think choosing maybe 2 or 3 key poses to emote the sentences instead of so many. Simplicity would be key here. Good scenario and idea though.
Paul Wei
Starts out strong but seems like you ran out of time to polish and smooth out the end.
Em Harrenstein
He is moving around way too much.