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Please rewind
by Austin Snow
An old man is showing his grandson some out dated tech. The device is his old VCR complete with home movies.
Comments
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Chris Ter Berg
you should add moving holds to make the poses more clear and make your animation 'read' better. Anticipation might help a whole lot too. That said I think the take was extremely difficult as the text implies a slow thoughtfullness that is hard to achieve
Eshan
too slow..
animation is good but timing needs improvement! good attempt though.
Also, you didnt made use of the 'click-clack' sound, which makes look odd.
Per Cardell
Animation needs more work. Check out the recourses at 11secondclub! Keept it up!
Em Harrenstein
You didn't acknowledge the sound effect in the background of the audio.