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NUCLEAR!?
by Rio Stewart
This isn't what he signed up for..
Comments
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Ramsey Parks
The way the second character moves is a bit odd especially his hands. I suggest using more frames and move the hands in an arc.
Nicole Brettell
Like the characters; they are superb in expressions but the arm movement of the guy with the green shirt needs a bit more work.
Jamal Pollack
eyes need focus
Ian Alexander Hanson
Like what you were going for at the end. Posing is a bit odd and weight / timing are off. Kick gesture is decent but not working yet.
Michael Kristiansen
so-so. Remember eyes, they look really stiff..
Terressa
Decent start. The character performances feel floaty and lack the energy that matches the dialogue. The poses are very stiff and not dynamic. The silhouettes do not read well. There is too much movement and not enough hold time between critical poses that are necessary. The mouth and eye movements are working well though the timing on the blinks could use adjusting.
Nathan Younger
body of both characters are swimmy.





