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NUCLEAR!?

by Rio Stewart

Final Rating: 3.57. Finished #105 out of 164 entries.

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Animator

Rio Stewart

Experience

9 months

Time Taken

25 hours

Description

This isn't what he signed up for..

Comments

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Ramsey Parks

The way the second character moves is a bit odd especially his hands. I suggest using more frames and move the hands in an arc.

Nicole Brettell

Like the characters; they are superb in expressions but the arm movement of the guy with the green shirt needs a bit more work.

Jamal Pollack

eyes need focus

Ian Alexander Hanson

Like what you were going for at the end. Posing is a bit odd and weight / timing are off. Kick gesture is decent but not working yet.

Michael Kristiansen

so-so. Remember eyes, they look really stiff..

Terressa

Decent start. The character performances feel floaty and lack the energy that matches the dialogue. The poses are very stiff and not dynamic. The silhouettes do not read well. There is too much movement and not enough hold time between critical poses that are necessary. The mouth and eye movements are working well though the timing on the blinks could use adjusting.

Nathan Younger

body of both characters are swimmy.