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Motorcycle Surprise
Doc is showing off his new motorcycle to Marty, who is thrilled about it until he finds out it runs on plutonium.
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Elizabeth
I like this so far: 1.) The mechanics of him jumping out of the vehicle is decent 2.) I would consider revisiting his hand gestures / getting rid of the twinning.
Ed Seager
Good staging and idea. Good timing on hand wipe. Show the fingers bending more for contact
Ian Alexander Hanson
Cool to see him in action, checking out the car, jumping out.
Watch arcs, which would improve a lot of these movements (such as the jump - feet and other body parts hit a brick wall). Body not working together and weight not quite right into 125. Get a faster move into "nuclear."
Michael Kristiansen
A little stiff in the poses but other than that decent animation.
Patrick King
add some blinks. I did not see him do it once.