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4th of July Overkill
by Michael Long
Young guy’s talking to his neighbor who’s made a rocket.
Comments
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Ed Seager
Good face at the end :)
Ian Alexander Hanson
Cool setup and I like the eyes at plutonium.
Use more spine, watch knee pops, arms crossed is not working correctly. Last pose good but could be more exaggerated.
Terressa
I like the establishing shot and the composition of the piece. If we could get more of a 3/4 view on the character and more dynamic poses with strong silhouettes, the energy would match the dialogue. The facial expressions are working very well. The hand locking on the elbow needs to loosen up and not feel so locked, animating slight movements in the fingers and upper part of the left arm would help.