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May the Flux be with You!
Traditional 2D Animation done within Photoshop, on a Cintiq.
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William Barry Eggington
You'll do well in the next one. :-)
Gabriel
a bit underacted in the end
Ramsey Parks
Poor lip sync and the characters don't react very well to there lines.
Ed Seager
Cool
Danny Kneip
A really fun render and concept, but neither character really exhibits any emotion, but I hear it in the audio so it must exist. Additionally, the lip sync on Luke's first line is very hard to read. Use the jaw, Luke!
Mitch Coote
Animation doesn't match the intensity of the dialogue.
Rosalia
the character seems very static while he is moving his laser-sword around, he only moves his head and arms. also he could use more facial expression
Rob Small
I like the style, but the lip synching could use some exaggeration to make it more exciting.
Ian Alexander Hanson
Cool concept!
Bodies not really moving too much and spinning saber around goes on too long.
Nathan Younger
characters are copy written- animation is good
Terressa
Cute concept. Both characters could benefit from more dynamic poses, both feel too upright and their silhouettes do not read well. The lip sync for Luke/Marty does not read at all. Staging feels too imbalanced I would change how the characters are positioned, if you flipped the Luke/Marty drawings so he was more screen left and turn Ben/Doc 3/4 facing center it would feel more balanced, just make sure not to cut his head off with the saber :)
Julien Ferritto
Good idea, good tribute but.. I think we don't feel the expressions of Luke.. It's too "sweet" ^^