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Back2TheGasStation
by jmims
ugh...don't you hate it when that happens..
(rough draft of my final product) -- still working on it
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Nicole Brettell
Pretty funny with a message behind the humor... DO NOT MESS WITH PLUTONIUM!
Kudos!
Kamal Bhattacharjee
what is this crap????
Zackary Fender
He probably should have asked before he fueled up. :{
Nice concept though!
Gabriel
Eye movement should be with stepped tangends
Ian Alexander Hanson
Decent framing with character centered. Concentrate more on getting head moving in relation to the whole body rather than just moving around by itself. Choose specific expressions and work hard to emphasize those.
Joel Murphy
when he reacts to the loud voice on the phone, give him some time to hear it first. He pulls the phone away right as the second voice is shouting Plutonium. Give him a small delay to actually hear the voice first.