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Nuclear Box
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I wanted to fix up the animation a bit but I couldn't render properly so I ended up just going with standard settings Mental Ray. Which ended up with the rendering taking about 4-5 nights. Sucks.
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Christoph Lendenfeld
animation isn't bad but the cutting took a lot of it away.
I'd put out the black frames and maybe try to reduce the cutting speed because it's hard to make out what's actually happening
Patrick King
camera shutter cuts and constant breaking 180 rule makes this very hard to read
Ramsey Parks
I looks good, but the black screen between every shot is really annoying.
Divyam Chand
why is there a black cut every time the camera changes? and the camera cuts abruptly just to show the doc moving...its not registering. needs better holds.
San Mathew
The black between cuts are a major distraction
Valentina Velieva
nice but cuts are a bit distracting
Sharath Kumar
Lot of Cuts... But the overall animation was well done!!
Ed Seager
you didn't so many cuts, quite good though
Ian Alexander Hanson
Some good things going on, like how you've got some weight in the first shot. Movements jerky, watch arcs. Camera clicks don't work with the sound too well and are distracting.
Terressa
Too many camera cuts. Only need 1-3, no more. The energy of the characters matches the dialogue well as does the lip sync. Body animations could be improved with greater definition of poses, holds and transitions.