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dead Jungle!

by Alireza Pakrou

Final Rating: 5.67. Finished #26 out of 164 entries.

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Animator

Alireza Pakrou

Experience

5year

Time Taken

10days

Description

i hope i get more comments for fixing my problems!!

Comments

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William Barry Eggington

Very expressive hand work.

Gabriel

Nice scenery. ..turn of the head needs more anticipation. ..the finger-thing is a bit over the top

Nicole Brettell

Don't really get it...

Lea

Animation wise this is good but what is he looking at? You'd think it was the car they were talking about but obviously not from the eye direction.

Max Calderon

Nice acting on malcolm but the guy under the car has a lot of dialogue to be hidden under the car

Ian Alexander Hanson

Not half bad, good finger work. Like how you never see the doc, and even so his body is pretty much working.

Don't like looking off in the distance and timings are off. nuclear gesture is way late.

Michael Kristiansen

Pretty cool. A little more expression in the end would be great I think. But well done sir.

Alex Kimbrough

great work but the lip sync need lots of work

Darnell Raymond

The background is cool i like the animation, it was good