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Moon Gossip
Jerry Stevenson and Frank Gibble on their usual Friday night hangout on the moon....
didn't have time to finish it up as much as I would've liked. sorry about the motion jitter on the cuts!
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Sharath Kumar
opening shot is funny.. sitting on planet..!!
Nicole Brettell
Wild...
Ed Seager
Cool idea
Ian Alexander Hanson
Cool concept!
Need a bit more work on follow-through. Also my focus is not always sure where to look.
Michael Kristiansen
I got distracted when the proffessor talks. Be carefull of animating too much in the scene that takes away the attention from the main focus. But decent job nevertheless.
Patrick Berger
Not the best mate.
Terressa
Funny! Solid facial animations, lots of eye blinks, darts and mouth shapes really bring the characters to life. Great use of IK hand and interacting with props. There could be more squash and stretch and anticipation poses and arcing movement. The drag and settles are working well. The ending doesn't work. I would cut on or around frame 379 and resolve it there.