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Brand New Bike!

by Mariel Folmer

Final Rating: 3.08. Finished #133 out of 164 entries.

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Animator

Mariel Folmer

Experience

3 Months

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

Charles has just received a gift from his uncle Dr."Doc" Matthew McLamp

Comments

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Elizabeth

Needs more in betweens, but has potential!

paul eliscupides

might have to work on the timing and spacing to fix the floaty movement

Ian Alexander Hanson

I like how he is trying to compare the bike to the instructions. I'd like more back and forth looks. Much is floaty and stiff, so speed some things up, loosen the spine, get better overlap. Also use weight shifts and hips even in sitting.