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To Marty's Surprise

by Joshua Hunt

Final Rating: 2.94. Finished #141 out of 164 entries.

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Animator

Joshua Hunt

Experience

3 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

I am currently taking animation classes at The Digital Animation and Visual Effects School

Comments

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Nicole Brettell

Expressions don't match the dialogue... "Needs a little more kick!". And Where is Doc?

Jamal Pollack

feels floaty and weightless

Ian Alexander Hanson

Not a bad framing, could move the window so I see more clearly what's outside. Need to use full body, even in sitting (esp. hips). Spine stiff, change / reaction at the end are not really strong enough.

Michael Kristiansen

way to low profile. extreme it more. looks stiff and dead.

Tyson Haeh

characters acting doesn't mach the dialogue