Nuclear

Nicole Brettell

Love the characters.

Danny Kneip

So much headroom. So distanced from the characters. You have to let the audience get closer to your subjects. We want to see them and feel what they're feeling. Keeping us away from them does you no favors.

That said, the strut walk in the beginning is good, but the general acting could be more subtle and less cliche - and less stiff. I think the lip sync is probably decent, but hard to tell.

Ian Alexander Hanson

Got some basics there, so not too hard to watch the actors.

Move camera down, include spine more, use shoulders in that last pose.