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A powerful machine
A professor has invented a new machine!
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Nicole Brettell
Pretty descent... Cool...
Ed Seager
I think this would quickly improve it you put some dirt in your curves
Louis Parker
Love the Kick!
Ian Alexander Hanson
Some good work.
Good movement, except bodies too stiff. Gestures and thoughts are not as strong as they could be.
The kick and sucker jokes are not great - I'd consider replacing with better thinking and gestures imho.
Michael Kristiansen
The red guys head is kinda stiff. I would make bigger movements, since the sound refers to that.
Terressa
Funny. I like this concept. The animations and timing could be improved. Marty's head movements feel very poppy and linear, try smoothing out into arcing motions. Stronger mouth shapes on Marty will help the lip sync read stronger. The kick and drop of plutonium feel laggy, as if they should be happening sooner.