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Great Doc
a junior (biggest fan) reacting on a scientist's experiment.
Comments
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Thomas
Great job with him looking up Plutonium!
Julien Ferritto
Very good job !
Ian Alexander Hanson
I like how he has to look up plutonium in a book.
Weight is good - watch arcs and watch fast and slow timings.
Terressa
The facial animations are working well, maybe a few less blinks on Doc. The walk in doesn't feel right though and both characters are way too bouncy too much forced pose to pose needs smoother transitions and anticipation. Tone down the bouncy and I think this would be a great piece. The poses are dynamic and solid, the staging is perfect, plenty of squash and stretch, too much though. Timing could also use a little more variation, the cadence of both characters is a bit robotic.
Celia Bullwinkel
Nice book prop :-)
Tyson Haeh
Nice work but I feel the character is moving way too much, he feels frantic





