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Plutonium

by Peyman Bodaghi September Competition Winner

Final Rating: 7.63. Finished #1 out of 164 entries.

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Animator

Peyman Bodaghi

Experience

6 Years

Time Taken

2 Week part Time

Description

Please eCritique My Animate. Thank You.

Comments

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Julien Ferritto

Love the idea, love the acting, love everything ! Fantastic job !

Tomasz Grenda

expet having him running front of cam u culd make a better cut and sell the gag better at the end :) lipcsyn is off a bit plus jump from bike is not so strong like his reaction on the bike:)

Ed Seager

Nice facial animation :)

Moby

Smooth

Kamal Bhattacharjee

Nice! But you have to control the intensity of lip-sync according to the voice modulation...

kail.li

Great ! like the timing

Ian Alexander Hanson

Cool concept and decent execution! Like the riding on the horse and how it loses energy.

Movements erratic, watch arcs, watch weighting. End shot should be more 3/4.

San Mathew

Fantastic animation! Very inspiring....I'm so jealous :(

Terressa

Very well done. Lots of squash and stretch, anticipation, arcing motions, the jumps both look fantastic. The only thing I think could be done is to push the squash pose a bit more forward before the leap up onto the scooter, other than that this is wonderful!

Celia Bullwinkel

Great animation and rendering. Watch the audio distortion, though.

Nicolás Rafael Suazo Monsalve

Good! Really good poses and awesome flow.
There is a little cut on camera a little bit weird and I would like some more expresive or exagerated poses, other than that feels great.

Danny Kneip

Adorable characters, strong lip sync and acting choices. The animation is very strong, especially the walking. The motion blur needs tweaking, as an aside, but overall, a very enjoyable piece!

Masoud Ebrahimi

Good Job !

David Cazeaux

awesome work !
Maybe it would have recquired some extra stretchs on the eyes and mouth, particulary with that kind of cartoony design.
some of the key poses should have be a lot more silhouette.
anyway that rocks !!!