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11 Seconds
by Jake
Description
My first attempt at the 11 second club.
Comments
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Celiene
Love your cute little characters but the lip sync isn't right at all. Keep trying.
Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein
Very whimsical. Try adding more movement to the characters.
Sabrina Winkel
Looks like the bird got some lunch! But have the characters move. Not just their mouthes
Byron Pockrandt
Add some eye movement. Add some body movement. Add some breakdowns with the birds mouth at the end.
John Sloan
Funny, but the animation is incredibly basic.